One Deep Breath "Emotion" Tanka
In a desert parched
I'm not dried out at this time
Sit still and listen
In time I will hear answers
what to seek and where to yield
Tanka are written in a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure (or short, long, short, long, long) and include a "pivotal image", cotemplation and emotion. They are also more lyrical and literary than haiku. Like haiku they are simple and often reflect nature. Check out the links below to learn more about tanka - the oldest form of Japanese poetry from which haiku originated.
I'm not dried out at this time
Sit still and listen
In time I will hear answers
what to seek and where to yield
Tanka are written in a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure (or short, long, short, long, long) and include a "pivotal image", cotemplation and emotion. They are also more lyrical and literary than haiku. Like haiku they are simple and often reflect nature. Check out the links below to learn more about tanka - the oldest form of Japanese poetry from which haiku originated.
10 Comments:
At 8:17 AM, Jennifer S. said…
Very good and speaks with wisdom
At 8:18 AM, Tammy Brierly said…
This was beautiful Helen. You nailed it :) It covers all the criteria wonderfully!
At 8:24 AM, paris parfait said…
Lovely, thoughtful tanka!
At 10:16 AM, Anonymous said…
Beautiful. We all need to listen some more.
At 2:13 PM, susanlavonne said…
this is a beautiful reminder for so many situations in life...thank you :-)
At 5:00 PM, Kayt said…
absolutely lovely :)
At 9:26 PM, Annie Jeffries said…
Another tanka about listening to the inner voice. I'm inspired.
At 1:59 PM, Mimey said…
In a desert parched, hmm, I'm sure I've been there. Love the juicy positivity of your lines.
At 1:59 PM, Anonymous said…
Isn't it nice, the way the answers come
when we take the time to listen?
nice poem
At 3:53 PM, Joyce Ellen Davis said…
A fine poem. The last three lines are especially good. I love it!
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