Yellow Rose

Walking in faith while I battle ALS.

Sunday, September 10, 2006

One Deep Breath "Emotion" Tanka

In a desert parched
I'm not dried out at this time
Sit still and listen
In time I will hear answers
what to seek and where to yield



Tanka are written in a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure (or short, long, short, long, long) and include a "pivotal image", cotemplation and emotion. They are also more lyrical and literary than haiku. Like haiku they are simple and often reflect nature. Check out the links below to learn more about tanka - the oldest form of Japanese poetry from which haiku originated.

10 Comments:

  • At 8:17 AM, Blogger Jennifer S. said…

    Very good and speaks with wisdom

     
  • At 8:18 AM, Blogger Tammy Brierly said…

    This was beautiful Helen. You nailed it :) It covers all the criteria wonderfully!

     
  • At 8:24 AM, Blogger paris parfait said…

    Lovely, thoughtful tanka!

     
  • At 10:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Beautiful. We all need to listen some more.

     
  • At 2:13 PM, Blogger susanlavonne said…

    this is a beautiful reminder for so many situations in life...thank you :-)

     
  • At 5:00 PM, Blogger Kayt said…

    absolutely lovely :)

     
  • At 9:26 PM, Blogger Annie Jeffries said…

    Another tanka about listening to the inner voice. I'm inspired.

     
  • At 1:59 PM, Blogger Mimey said…

    In a desert parched, hmm, I'm sure I've been there. Love the juicy positivity of your lines.

     
  • At 1:59 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Isn't it nice, the way the answers come
    when we take the time to listen?
    nice poem

     
  • At 3:53 PM, Blogger Joyce Ellen Davis said…

    A fine poem. The last three lines are especially good. I love it!

     

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